lunes, 3 de noviembre de 2014

Correction of the article about Health issues

Manorexia increasing in us 
Manorexia is the same as  anorexia but manorexia is only for men, and anorexia for women.
This problem is because men eat in disorder, and they don't eat what it is necessary to have a good metabolism.
No one knows for sure how the origin of this problems, but someone feel that it is for the same an anorexia, for women to have a perfect body,"For one,men may finally be feeling the pressure of physical perfection that women have been dealing for decades".
 And other reason is that men are now being properly diagnosed, " A huge obstacle for doctors has been that the simples of eating disorders among men are slightly different that for women's".
One cause is that the men develop eating disorders for the same reason as women ," genetic, low self-esteem, trauma and cultural influence ". An other cause is the emotional factors, for example insecurity, some people think that are so much fat and they eat less to be skinnier.
This problem is present in kids, because kids don't have a disorder in their eating because they eat nothing of food, and the number of children overweight is increasing. An other reason is because has parents don't control their eating, and they are left to eat whatever they want, and this is bad because the children have the consequence of this, because they don't eat all the nutrients they need.
An other reason why people have manor exit , is because nothing controles there diet , and they never eat, or say that they eat and they lying, and this is a factor for them anorexia in the countries.
In conclusion, firstly people don't take care of there diet, and don't have conscience to care for them.
And they have problems with there bodies because they don't have a good self-esteem
  

Bibliography 
-"Manorexia: Men with eating disorders on the rise" in English b course companion (pp43)(2009) Great Clarendon street, Oxford ox26dp.

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